Not a new painting, but rather a rescued one.
This one has made quite a journey along the Via Dolorosa... starting as quite pristine clear washes (well, very pristine for my usual style!) through a miserable correction attempt that led to a valuable lesson and then to a frantic quest of salvaging it - I think it is now done.
I brought it to our critique group on Thursday, and the responses were positive. The 3 group members who were following the saga on my blog said that had they not been clued in on the turmoil, they wouldn't even know there was a problem with it. LimaB even called me after the meeting to file an official request that I do not touch that painting, as it is really a good one.
"Please, PLEASE don't touch it, Nava", she pled, knowing the power of my self-destructiveness.
Well, needless to say, I did go into it today with a brush (sorry, LimaB), but just to add some very final touches, which I actually think have improved it. Now the left cheek is not a flat surface, but finally has form.
So, counting my losses: I have lost the clean washes of pure color, and some of the white of the paper.
But - I managed to maintain the white shape, as well as most of the shapes in the painting and the pure color in the important parts. For someone who is not a shape painter, with a chronic tendency to dull all the color - this is a MAJOR achievement!!
And, I have gained a lot of fun, as in my rescue attempts, I got into the careless mode, so I allowed myself to used some stamping and gouache, which add depth and interest. And let's not forget that this incident inspired a sentence of the month post.
Bottom line - I think this final version is much more a "Nava" painting, and it does capture the essence of the person much better than the clear cheery one. Hmm... does that mean I actually need to thank The JohnnyB? Or is it my natural inclination to take an OK painting and bring it to a point of disaster so I revive it and take it beyond? Ah well, that's just too profound for a lazy Saturday afternoon...
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Saturday, January 26, 2008
Salvation
Labels:
Art Critiques,
Breakthrough,
Color,
Figurative,
Learning,
Never Give Up,
Portraits,
Watercolor
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Hi Nava,
I clicked on your blog to see what you were up to and was astounded to see John Salminen's face! I KNEW it HAD to be him so I followed the blogs backwards to find out you'd just been to his workshop. WHAT A GRAET likeness and painting. I enjoy your comments too. Keep being luminous!
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